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"Monday Mornings" Discussion: Chapters 9-16
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asta77 From: asta77 Date: April 9th, 2012 10:42 pm (UTC) (Link Me)
but it does feel at times like he does a lot of telling and not a lot of showing w/ regard to character

Yes! I have to admit, I started skipping over some paragraphs because it seemed like far too much exposition about the character(s).
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